Wednesday, May 14, 2025

Orgy in Father Ludovik's Parish - a novel excerpt - By Leonard Veizi


Inspector Edi from the city police precinct slammed on the brakes with both feet. The tires screeched sharply across the asphalt and struck the curb of the sidewalk. He jumped out of the car hastily, slammed the door shut, and took only two steps forward. He froze. He couldn’t go any further. Within seconds, his heartbeat went erratic. He felt it pounding like a drum that wouldn’t stop. He blinked and clenched his jaw. The veins in his forehead and temples swelled visibly, and the skin on his face tightened. Everything he was seeing before him struck him harder than he had imagined during those frantic minutes of racing to arrive in the shortest time possible.
He couldn’t remember ever feeling this way before. And yet, over the years, he had seen all kinds of scenes.
The inspector cursed under his breath.
He tried to hurry toward the center of the crime scene, but strangely, his limbs wouldn’t obey. His knees and ankles felt locked, and a sharp pain crawled upward. For the second time, he felt as if his will to move was being held hostage by a monstrous force. He couldn’t take a single step forward. He clenched his jaw until his teeth ground, squinted his eyes, and placed his hands on his waist, trying to focus and take in everything with his gaze.
All this lasted only a few moments: three or four seconds, maybe five—not more. But even that was enough for him to feel like he had lost his police composure. He should have been more level-headed.
“So what then...?!” — it seemed he said aloud. After all, it wasn’t anything he hadn’t seen before: murder, arson, rape... He shrugged and felt the familiar crack in his neck. That was it. The cramp was over. Yet, instinctively, he was still standing there, petrified.
“What’s happening to me?” — he wondered.
Was he dreaming? He wanted to break free from that state, but no muscle would obey, while his pupils contracted further. In his mind, no thought held together. Everything broke, shattered, came in fragments, and he still hadn’t grasped the thread of it all.
He had driven the 1,200 meters separating his apartment from the crime scene like a bat out of hell, the tires of his car screeching menacingly across the pavement. The traffic lights at the intersections were out, but there had been no risk of collision—he hadn’t even turned his head to look either way for safety.
It was still dark when the station called about a fatal incident at the outskirts of the city, right near the cemetery. He didn’t ask for any further explanation. He leapt out of bed and rushed out of his apartment door. The car had started as soon as he turned the key, and the gears shifted with a threatening grind until it reached top speed. Upon arriving at the scene, the first thing that crossed his mind was that nothing he had imagined in those few minutes since the phone rang matched what he was now seeing around him.
The tragic accident, conveyed to him in fragmented sentences, was far worse. And perhaps... it wasn’t an accident at all...
From the road he had just come from, another car appeared, speeding toward him. He managed to make out the signs on the roof: “TV 10.” The car stopped just a meter away.
“Inspector, what happened here?”
It was Venera, the reporter from the city’s only television station. She had opened the door to get out before the car had fully stopped. The urgency in her voice irritated him but gave him the jolt he needed to gather himself.
“No comment,” he said curtly and rushed ahead.
The reporter, a young and beautiful woman, was one of the people who annoyed him the most. She only knew how to pester him persistently. She waited with the camera raised at the police precinct door and called him endlessly for information. She knew no working hours.
“Roll it,” he heard her say to the cameraman behind him. Though he had walked a few steps, he still caught her next command: “Get everything. Everything you can...”
Inspector Edi quickened his pace. The scene was truly harrowing. The parish church, the city’s only place of worship, had been reduced to ashes by a massive fire. Here and there, hotspots still burned. The police had managed to cordon off the area with yellow tape, while two experts in black suits circled the smoke-blackened walls collecting what little evidence remained. Three exhausted firefighters had removed their helmets and leaned against the red fire truck, which was still dripping water. A photographer was snapping photos relentlessly...
“What a disaster,” the inspector muttered through nearly shut lips. His voice sounded like it came from someone else.
Now, after that initial shock, he had regained his composure. A deep anger distorted his face. His gaze had turned vicious. It was as if everyone before him was a suspect in need of handcuffs. He was unshaven, and his hastily buttoned shirt was missing two buttons. One of the officers approached quickly.
“This way, chief,” he said, pointing to a clear path. “It’s a gruesome sight. There are some bodies beneath the stones,” the officer gestured, but Inspector Edi didn’t even glance in that direction. He was staring at the top of the bell tower, where the flames had left no visible trace.
“How many?” he asked instinctively, walking beside the officer.
The photographer raised the camera and snapped a shot in his direction. The inspector figured that photo would end up in the paper. “Idiot!” he wanted to shout at the crime unit employee who had taken the picture.
“We’ve found four,” the other replied quietly.
Inspector Edi stopped and turned toward the officer. Only then did he recognize his subordinate, Eno.
“Four bodies?!”
More than a question, it was a howl that hung in the air. It seemed unbelievable that the burning of the parish could come with so many casualties.
“There may be more,” Eno said, struggling with the words. “We’re still searching.”
The officer looked his superior straight in the eye, trying to make the report sound fully credible.
“This is... fa...tal!” the inspector said, the syllables catching in his teeth.
He moved forward while the officer stayed a step behind.
“Who would have imagined, chief?!”
Inspector Edi bent forward, placing his palms on his knees to balance himself, and began to examine one of the corpses. It was completely charred. At first glance, it appeared to be a woman.
“What about Father Ludovik?” Inspector Edi turned to his subordinate. He shrugged.
"Maybe it's among the bodies," he said. "So far, it hasn’t been seen anywhere."
They entered the building. The morning light couldn't penetrate the gloom of that dismal place. A few meters ahead, two police officers lifted the collapsed beams and uncovered something.
"Another one," said one of them, pointing down, in front of his feet.
Inspector Edi and Officer Eno took a couple of steps and were beside them. One of the policemen lit up the spot with a flashlight. The body the officer was pointing at was as charred as the others.
"That makes five," Eno murmured.
"Enough!" Inspector Edi cut him off shortly. Then he turned to him and asked, "Any witnesses?"
"I've sent people to deal with that," said Eno, who was also closely examining the body. "They're going door to door. Over there, in the two buildings closest to the parish."
From a distance, the siren of a police car could be heard. Someone else was arriving at the crime scene. The inspector didn’t bother to figure out who was in the approaching police car with its lights on, pulling up to the charred parish.
"Looks like a war zone," he said to Officer Eno, his words sounding more like a sigh.
He kept staring at the corpse, as if he could recognize it by focusing on the remains visible in the skeleton. The police siren grew louder. Its lights flashed after the final turn that led to the parish entrance.
"At first glance, it seems to be a woman," said Eno, leaning his head closer to the body the inspector was examining. The other didn’t pay much attention. Lately, Eno had been training as a crime officer. He had good instincts. The last two crimes had been solved thanks to information gathered by him.
"Has anyone been identified?" Inspector Edi asked.
The officer shrugged.
"Under these conditions… only the lab could make that possible."
Before stepping over the threshold to go outside, the inspector turned back once more. Everything had burned. The paintings on the walls were no longer visible. A layer of soot covered everything, even the highest part of the dome.
The police car, siren blaring and lights spinning continuously, stopped a few meters away.
"The chief's here," a voice was heard.
Inspector Edi and Officer Eno turned their heads. The regional police chief also stood frozen, eyes wide, hands still on the door of the car he had just stepped out of. Venera approached immediately with a microphone in hand. The cameraman was recording, but the captain made an irritated gesture for her to back off.
"Now the trouble begins," whispered Inspector Edi. "This incident is going to cause us a lot of problems."
Officer Eno nodded. The inspector walked toward the spot where the regional police chief was standing, to report the initial findings.

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